Re: PATCH: copy-edit File-I/O section of manual

[Sandra Loosemore <sandra at codesourcery dot com>]

Daniel Jacobowitz wrote:
> Shh... let's all take a deep breath, yes?  Eli, I realize it will have
> to wait until you can find the time, but could you look at Sandra's
> revised text at some point?  Better later than never.

Thanks, Daniel.  On reflection, I think Eli and I are just thinking at 
cross-purposes here.  Eli is worried about what has changed at a line-by-line 
level, while I have been thinking in terms of the "big picture" of bringing the 
writing in this section as a whole up to an acceptable standard of quality for a 
professional document.  Are there other mistakes I may have missed or different 
formatting or font conventions that should be applied consistently throughout 
the section?  That's why I suggested applying the patch and proofreading the 
resulting text.

-Sandra