[patch/commit] News cleanups.

[Daniel Jacobowitz]

On Sun, Aug 04, 2002 at 10:48:35AM -0400, Andrew Cagney wrote:
> >-Support for multithreaded applications using LinuxThreads has been added
> >>-for arm*-*-linux*, i[3456]86-*-linux*, mips*-*-linux*, powerpc*-*-linux*,
> >>-and sh*-*-linux*.
> >>+Support for multithreaded applications using libthread_db has been
> >>+added for arm*-*-linux*-gnu*, i[3456]86-*-linux*-gnu*,
> >>+mips*-*-linux*-gnu*, powerpc*-*-linux*-gnu*, and sh*-*-linux*-gnu*.
> 
> Is ``Support for debugging multi-threaded applications, that use 
> GNU/Linux's thread library, has been added.'' better?

I'd say ``Support for debugging multi-threaded applications which use
the GNU/Linux LinuxThreads package has been added.''  Because I believe
``which'' and ``that'' aren't supposed to start parentheticals, and
because LinuxThreads is not "GNU/Linux's thread library"; there are at
least two or three others.

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Daniel Jacobowitz                           Carnegie Mellon University
MontaVista Software                         Debian GNU/Linux Developer