(minor) English grammatical revisions to htdocs/cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html

[amores perros]

(minor) English grammatical revisions to htdocs/cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html
Two files included directly.

#1 = ChangeLog entry (I couldn't find any ChangeLog in htdocs,
     so I followed the format of one from some unrelated project --
     feel free to amend it as you wish)
#2 = patch file (generated in htdocs subdirectory)


-- #1 ----------- (ChangeLog entry)

2002-10-21 Perry Rapp

        * cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html

        English grammatical revisions.

-- #2 ----------- (patch)

Index: cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/cygwin/htdocs/cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -p -r1.13 ntsec.html
--- cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html	11 Sep 2002 08:36:44 -0000	1.13
+++ cygwin-ug-net/ntsec.html	21 Oct 2002 22:45:56 -0000
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ set </P
 >The two important types of ACEs are the `access allowed ACE' and the
`access denied ACE'. The ntsec patch only used `access allowed ACEs' up
to Cygwin version 1.1.0. Later versions use `access denied ACEs' as well
-to reflect the UNIX permissions as good as possible.</P
+to reflect the UNIX permissions as well as possible.</P
 ><P
 >The possible permissions on objects are more detailed than in
UNIX. For example, the permission to delete an object is different
@@ -437,9 +437,9 @@ well known group with different naming i
Outside of domains the group is named 'None' (`Kein' in German, `Aucun'
in French, etc.), in domains it is named 'Domain Users'.  Unfortunately,
the group `None' is never shown in the user admin tool outside of domains!
-This is very confusing but it seems that this has no negativ influences.</P
+This is very confusing but it seems that this has no negative 
influences.</P
 ><P
->To work correctly the ntsec patch depends on reasoned files
+>To work correctly the ntsec patch depends on having reasonable files
<TT
CLASS="FILENAME"
 >/etc/passwd/</TT
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ have to change the primary group by hand
not what you want (and I'm sure, it's not what you want!)</P
 ><P
 >Look at the following examples, which were parts of my files before
-storing SIDs in /etc/passwd and /etc/group has been introduced (See next
+storing SIDs in /etc/passwd and /etc/group had been introduced (see next
chapter for details).  With the exception of my personal user entry, all
entries are well known entries.</P
 ><DIV
@@ -538,8 +538,8 @@ powerusers::547:</PRE
 ></TABLE
 ></DIV
 ><P
->As you can see, I've changed my primary group membership from 513 (None)
-to 547 (powerusers).  So all file I created inside of Cygwin were now owned
+>As you can see, I'd changed my primary group membership from 513 (None)
+to 547 (powerusers).  So all files I created inside of Cygwin would be 
owned
by the powerusers group instead of None.  This is the way I liked it.</P
 ><P
 >Groups may be mentioned in the passwd file, too. This has two
@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ COMPACT="COMPACT"
<B
CLASS="COMMAND"
 >ls -l</B
-> is often better readable.</P
+> is often more readable.</P
 ></LI
 ><LI
 ><P
@@ -1161,14 +1161,14 @@ CLASS="SCREEN"
 ></TR
 ></TABLE
 ><P
->Note that administrators do not have all that user rights set by 
default.</P
+>Note that administrators do not have all those user rights set by 
default.</P
 ><P
 >Two new Cygwin calls are introduced to support porting
<B
CLASS="COMMAND"
 >setuid</B
 > applications with a minimum of effort. You only
-have to care to give Cygwin the right access token and then you can call
+need take care to give Cygwin the right access token and then you can call
<B
CLASS="COMMAND"
 >seteuid</B
@@ -1442,4 +1442,4 @@ VALIGN="top"
 ></DIV
 ></BODY
 ></HTML
->
\ No newline at end of file
+>




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