Minor editing for example scripts.

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-inodewatch.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-inodewatch.xml
index 098524aee3e76f81c0db9a7c34a4bea19fcfc41d..47cc4e166e2f78bc8b97dad1d6980bc528cb2279 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-inodewatch.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-inodewatch.xml
@@ -59,7 +59,8 @@ no script in examples
 <remark>need to add references to sources/man pages that explain how "dev_nr = $file->f_dentry->d_inode->i_sb->s_dev" and "($1 &lt;&lt; 20 | $2)".</remark>
 
 
-<para><xref linkend="inodewatch"/> takes the following information about the file as an argument:</para>
+<para><xref linkend="inodewatch"/> takes the following information about the
+file as arguments on the command line:</para>
 <indexterm>
        <primary>script examples</primary>
        <secondary>file device number (integer format)</secondary>
@@ -81,7 +82,9 @@ no script in examples
 </indexterm>
 
 <itemizedlist>
-       <listitem><para>The file's device number, in integer format. When this is passed to the script as the first argument, be sure to replace any <computeroutput>0</computeroutput> with a space.</para></listitem>
+       <listitem><para>The file's major device number.</para></listitem>
+
+       <listitem><para>The file's minor device number.</para></listitem>
                        
        <listitem><para>The file's <command>inode</command> number.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
@@ -121,9 +124,9 @@ no script in examples
        <secondary>examples of SystemTap scripts</secondary>
 </indexterm>
 
-<para><computeroutput>805</computeroutput> is the device number, while <computeroutput>1078319</computeroutput> is the <command>inode</command> number. To start monitoring <filename>/etc/crontab</filename>, run <command>stap inodewatch.stp 8 5 1078319</command>.</para>
+<para><computeroutput>805</computeroutput> is the base-16 (hexadecimal) device number. The lower two digits are the minor device number and the upper digits are the major number. <computeroutput>1078319</computeroutput> is the <command>inode</command> number. To start monitoring <filename>/etc/crontab</filename>, run <command>stap inodewatch.stp 0x8 0x05 1078319</command> (The <command>0x</command> prefixes indicate base-16 values.</para>
 
-<para>The output of this command contains the name and ID of any process performing a read/write, the function it is performing (i.e. <command>vfs_read</command> or <command>vfs_write</command>), the device number (in hex format), and the <command>inode</command> number. <xref linkend="inodewatchoutput"/> contains the output of <command>stap inodewatch.stp 8 5 1078319</command> (when <command>cat /etc/crontab</command> is executed while the script is running) :</para>
+<para>The output of this command contains the name and ID of any process performing a read/write, the function it is performing (i.e. <command>vfs_read</command> or <command>vfs_write</command>), the device number (in hex format), and the <command>inode</command> number. <xref linkend="inodewatchoutput"/> contains the output of <command>stap inodewatch.stp 0x8 0x05 1078319</command> (when <command>cat /etc/crontab</command> is executed while the script is running) :</para>
 
 
 <example id="inodewatchoutput">

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-sockettrace.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-sockettrace.xml
index 9a9e1c5569f34f4220333bd487a040abeda3aaa3..6e913b48503ade7a438b0c1b9f20ffc1ec357ce2 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-sockettrace.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-sockettrace.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
                <title>socket-trace.stp</title>
 <para>
 <programlisting>
-       <xi:include parse="text" href="extras/testsuite/systemtap.examples/network/socket-trace.stp" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+<xi:include parse="text" href="extras/testsuite/systemtap.examples/network/socket-trace.stp" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </programlisting>
 </para>
 </formalpara>          

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-traceio2.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-traceio2.xml
index 4fc7ecc2217a37fa95256cb2dfa79ef1d2f0c79b..7451de98dd87e5442240293d04df775c59434bb6 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-traceio2.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Useful_Scripts-traceio2.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
                </para>
                
 <formalpara id="traceio2">
-       <title>traceio2-simple.stp</title>
+       <title>traceio2.stp</title>
 <para>
 <programlisting>
 <xi:include parse="text" href="extras/testsuite/systemtap.examples/io/traceio2.stp" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />