minimized RHEL-isms in doc source, still need to edit <productname> and <productnumbe...

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Author_Group.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Author_Group.xml
index 676af712cd1c85403daa8ac38dfaa4ae2a70dd00..4d81c74598aec12495a463ddfaa0ec6f3e497a02 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Author_Group.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Author_Group.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 ]>
 
 <authorgroup>
-       <corpauthor>Red Hat Enterprise Linux Documentation</corpauthor>
+       <corpauthor>Red Hat, Inc.</corpauthor>
        <author>
                <firstname>Don</firstname>
                <surname>Domingo </surname>

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Book_Info.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
index 1599dc53f86f18729556ae3b40b448142c67007c..b8eba008e2fb74e3840dc582118501a816f605db 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Book_Info.xml
@@ -7,10 +7,14 @@
        <subtitle condition="RedHat">Introduction to SystemTap (for Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5.3)</subtitle>
        <subtitle condition="fedora">Introduction to SystemTap (for Fedora Core 10)</subtitle>
        <edition>2.0</edition>
+       
        <productname>Red Hat Enterprise Linux</productname>
        <productnumber>5</productnumber>
+       
        <pubsnumber>2</pubsnumber>
-       <abstract><para>This guide provides basic instructions on how to use SystemTap to monitor different subsystems of &PRODUCT; in finer detail. The <citetitle>SystemTap Beginners Guide</citetitle> is recommended for users who have taken <ulink url="https://www.redhat.com/courses/rh133_red_hat_linux_system_administration_and_rhct_exam/">RHCT</ulink> or have a similar level of expertise in &PRODUCT;.</para></abstract>
+       <abstract condition="RedHat"><para>This guide provides basic instructions on how to use SystemTap to monitor different subsystems of &PRODUCT; in finer detail. The <citetitle>SystemTap Beginners Guide</citetitle> is recommended for users who have taken <ulink url="https://www.redhat.com/courses/rh133_red_hat_linux_system_administration_and_rhct_exam/">RHCT</ulink> or have a similar level of expertise in &PRODUCT;.</para></abstract>
+       
+       <abstract condition="fedora"><para>This guide provides basic instructions on how to use SystemTap to monitor different subsystems of Fedora Core 10 in finer detail. The <citetitle>SystemTap Beginners Guide</citetitle> is recommended for users who have taken <ulink url="https://www.redhat.com/courses/rh133_red_hat_linux_system_administration_and_rhct_exam/">RHCT</ulink> or have a similar level of expertise in Fedora Core 10.</para></abstract>
        <corpauthor>
                <inlinemediaobject>
                        <imageobject>

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Introduction.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Introduction.xml
index 005bfba0368e4143850ab26cfff3c2102ae9042a..afb9e738fb9a79927b3ad920cd494c6193e11033 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Introduction.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Introduction.xml
@@ -101,7 +101,9 @@
 <primary>capabilities of SystemTap</primary>
 <secondary>Introduction</secondary>
 </indexterm>           
-       <para>SystemTap was originally developed to provide functionality for &PROD; similar to previous Linux probing tools such as <application>dprobes</application> and the Linux Trace Toolkit. SystemTap aims to supplement the existing suite of Linux monitoring tools by providing users with the infrastructure to track kernel activity. In addition, SystemTap combines this capability with two things:</para>             
+<para condition="RedHat">SystemTap was originally developed to provide functionality for &PROD; similar to previous Linux probing tools such as <application>dprobes</application> and the Linux Trace Toolkit. SystemTap aims to supplement the existing suite of Linux monitoring tools by providing users with the infrastructure to track kernel activity. In addition, SystemTap combines this capability with two things:</para> 
+       
+<para condition="fedora">SystemTap was originally developed to provide functionality for Fedora Core 10 similar to previous Linux probing tools such as <application>dprobes</application> and the Linux Trace Toolkit. SystemTap aims to supplement the existing suite of Linux monitoring tools by providing users with the infrastructure to track kernel activity. In addition, SystemTap combines this capability with two things:</para>
                
 <!--           
                <para>SystemTap was originally developed as a working &PROD; version of old Linux probing tools such as <application>dprobes</application> and the Linux Trace Toolkit. Further, SystemTap can also be considered the Linux answer to <firstterm>Dtrace</firstterm>. Dtrace is a Sun Microsystems "dynamic tracing" framework that assists administrators in monitoring  and troubleshooting kernel and user-space applications in real time.</para>